Nice rewrite, fun to read! Ready for part two!
I tried the original Pulses. I didn’t get very far. It was full of technical details on how things worked. I don’t need that. [Then] I discovered he had rewritten Pulses to correct the problems some readers like me had complained about. So . . . I tried Part One of the trilogy. It was like reading a different book. [T]he plots unfolded much more quickly and was much easier to follow and enjoy. It was quite an adventure! . . . So I am now eager to move on to Part Two. If it’s as good as what I just read, I have another week of memorable reading ahead.